Analyzing the Obama Inaugural Address

As with previous speeches this political season, I decided to read, not watch, Barack Obama's Inaugural Address. The usual Bartish play-by-play dissection follows. Believe it or not, this Republican found things to like in the speech. I almost titled this posting "Barack Obama: Crypto-Neocon?" I'm typing my comments in bold for ease of reading, though it won't be too hard to figure out where Obama's speaking and where I'm writing.

My fellow citizens:
I stand here today humbled by the task before us, grateful for the trust you have bestowed, mindful of the sacrifices borne by our ancestors. I thank President Bush for his service to our nation, as well as the generosity and cooperation he has shown throughout this transition.

Does this mean there won't be a war crimes trial, as Nancy Pelosi wants?

Forty-four Americans have now taken the presidential oath. The words have been spoken during rising tides of prosperity and the still waters of peace. Yet, every so often the oath is taken amidst gathering clouds and raging storms. At these moments, America has carried on not simply because of the skill or vision of those in high office, but because We the People have remained faithful to the ideals of our forbearers, and true to our founding documents.
So it has been. So it must be with this generation of Americans.

Good.

That we are in the midst of crisis is now well understood. Our nation is at war, against a far-reaching network of violence and hatred.

Wow. This might come as a surprise to some of the liberals I interact with online, especially those who are convinced that everything would be fine with our dealings with al-Qaeda if we just treated them like common criminals and stopped making war on them. This is also some pretty harsh language from a guy who said he wouldn't hesitate to negotiate with any of our adversaries.

Our economy is badly weakened, a consequence of greed and irresponsibility on the part of some, but also our collective failure to make hard choices and prepare the nation for a new age. Homes have been lost; jobs shed; businesses shuttered. Our health care is too costly; our schools fail too many; and each day brings further evidence that the ways we use energy strengthen our adversaries and threaten our planet. These are the indicators of crisis, subject to data and statistics. Less measurable but no less profound is a sapping of confidence across our land - a nagging fear that America's decline is inevitable, and that the next generation must lower its sights.
Today I say to you that the challenges we face are real. They are serious and they are many. They will not be met easily or in a short span of time. But know this, America - they will be met.

Attaboy, Mr. President. Way to cheer us up and inspire us.

On this day, we gather because we have chosen hope over fear, unity of purpose over conflict and discord.

This is a refrain from the campaign: hope and change. We don't gather because of your campaign, sir. We gather to watch the President get sworn into office.

On this day, we come to proclaim an end to the petty grievances and false promises, the recriminations and worn out dogmas, that for far too long have strangled our politics.

If he's talking about the political campaign or his opponents, then this line is somewhat disingenuous, as he is simultaneously taking a slap at his political opponents while trying to seem above politics.

We remain a young nation, but in the words of Scripture, the time has come to set aside childish things. The time has come to reaffirm our enduring spirit; to choose our better history; to carry forward that precious gift, that noble idea, passed on from generation to generation: the God-given promise that all are equal, all are free, and all deserve a chance to pursue their full measure of happiness.

Quoting scripture and using "God-given." Good.

In reaffirming the greatness of our nation, we understand that greatness is never a given. It must be earned. Our journey has never been one of short-cuts or settling for less. It has not been the path for the faint-hearted - for those who prefer leisure over work, or seek only the pleasures of riches and fame. Rather, it has been the risk-takers, the doers, the makers of things - some celebrated but more often men and women obscure in their labor, who have carried us up the long, rugged path towards prosperity and freedom.

This is a truly remarkable statement, as he is praising both American exceptionalism and individual achievement, two things liberals are often at great pains to downplay.

For us, they packed up their few worldly possessions and traveled across oceans in search of a new life.
For us, they toiled in sweatshops and settled the West; endured the lash of the whip and plowed the hard earth.
For us, they fought and died, in places like Concord and Gettysburg; Normandy and Khe Sahn.

Honoring immigrants, laborers, and the military. Good.

Time and again these men and women struggled and sacrificed and worked till their hands were raw so that we might live a better life. They saw America as bigger than the sum of our individual ambitions; greater than all the differences of birth or wealth or faction.
This is the journey we continue today. We remain the most prosperous, powerful nation on Earth. Our workers are no less productive than when this crisis began. Our minds are no less inventive, our goods and services no less needed than they were last week or last month or last year. Our capacity remains undiminished. But our time of standing pat, of protecting narrow interests and putting off unpleasant decisions - that time has surely passed. Starting today, we must pick ourselves up, dust ourselves off, and begin again the work of remaking America.

More on American exceptionalism. Like we didn't know this already? Oh, wait. We were supposed to be feeling lost and depressed over the economy, so this section was designed to uplift the audience.

For everywhere we look, there is work to be done. The state of the economy calls for action, bold and swift, and we will act - not only to create new jobs, but to lay a new foundation for growth. We will build the roads and bridges, the electric grids and digital lines that feed our commerce and bind us together. We will restore science to its rightful place, and wield technology's wonders to raise health care's quality and lower its cost. We will harness the sun and the winds and the soil to fuel our cars and run our factories. And we will transform our schools and colleges and universities to meet the demands of a new age. All this we can do. And all this we will do.

Who is this "We?" The government? Private industry? Both? The American people?

I like the "restore science to its rightful place" line, but I must wonder what shape that will take.

Now, there are some who question the scale of our ambitions - who suggest that our system cannot tolerate too many big plans. Their memories are short. For they have forgotten what this country has already done; what free men and women can achieve when imagination is joined to common purpose, and necessity to courage.

Again, I wonder who or what he's talking about here--the ambitions (aspirations) of individual Americans, or the ambitions of our government?

What the cynics fail to understand is that the ground has shifted beneath them - that the stale political arguments that have consumed us for so long no longer apply.

Translation: "Conservatism is passé, New Deal big government is back, and there's nothing you can do about it."

The question we ask today is not whether our government is too big or too small, but whether it works - whether it helps families find jobs at a decent wage, care they can afford, a retirement that is dignified. Where the answer is yes, we intend to move forward. Where the answer is no, programs will end. And those of us who manage the public's dollars will be held to account - to spend wisely, reform bad habits, and do our business in the light of day - because only then can we restore the vital trust between a people and their government.

Programs will end? Oh, really? With billions of dollars spent so far, and trillions more to be spent? I'll believe it when I see it.

Nor is the question before us whether the market is a force for good or ill. Its power to generate wealth and expand freedom is unmatched, but this crisis has reminded us that without a watchful eye, the market can spin out of control - and that a nation cannot prosper long when it favors only the prosperous.

True, with a caveat. The last part--that a nation cannot prosper long when it favors only the prosperous--is both true and untrue. If the laws are established to explicitly help one particular class, then bad things can happen. However, if the laws are established to enable all citizens to prosper if they have the willingness and ability, but some people don't have that willingness or ability, that is not the fault of the prosperous, and it is not the job of government to "fix" that. That's the fundamental difference between "life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness" and "liberty, equality, and fraternity."

The success of our economy has always depended not just on the size of our Gross Domestic Product, but on the reach of our prosperity; on our ability to extend opportunity to every willing heart - not out of charity, but because it is the surest route to our common good.

Again, I'd say this is mostly true. However, the liberal politician's definition of "extending opportunity" is different from the conservative's definition. I suppose if I understood that difference, I'd be a liberal.

As for our common defense, we reject as false the choice between our safety and our ideals. Our Founding Fathers, faced with perils we can scarcely imagine, drafted a charter to assure the rule of law and the rights of man, a charter expanded by the blood of generations. Those ideals still light the world, and we will not give them up for expedience's sake. And so to all other peoples and governments who are watching today, from the grandest capitals to the small village where my father was born: know that America is a friend of each nation and every man, woman, and child who seeks a future of peace and dignity, and that we are ready to lead once more.

This is an evocation of John F. Kennedy:

Let every nation know, whether it wishes us well or ill, that we shall pay any price, bear any burden, meet any hardship, support any friend, oppose any foe, in order to assure the survival and the success of liberty.

Recall that earlier generations faced down fascism and communism not just with missiles and tanks, but with sturdy alliances and enduring convictions. They understood that our power alone cannot protect us, nor does it entitle us to do as we please. Instead, they knew that our power grows through its prudent use; our security emanates from the justness of our cause, the force of our example, the tempering qualities of humility and restraint.
We are the keepers of this legacy. Guided by these principles once more, we can meet those new threats that demand even greater effort - even greater cooperation and understanding between nations. We will begin to responsibly leave Iraq to its people, and forge a hard-earned peace in Afghanistan. With old friends and former foes, we will work tirelessly to lessen the nuclear threat, and roll back the specter of a warming planet. We will not apologize for our way of life, nor will we waver in its defense, and for those who seek to advance their aims by inducing terror and slaughtering innocents, we say to you now that our spirit is stronger and cannot be broken; you cannot outlast us, and we will defeat you.

Wow. This section is unbelievable. Aside from the bit about global warming, this is almost straight out of the Bush Doctrine. "We will not apologize for our way of life." Europeans would call that "unilateralism." "Nor will we waiver in its defense" sounds like a willingness to use military force. The rest of it sounds like Bush's "we will not falter, we will not fail" address or his September 20, 2001 articulation of the Bush Doctrine. Translation: Obama will continue the War on Terror.

For we know that our patchwork heritage is a strength, not a weakness. We are a nation of Christians and Muslims, Jews and Hindus - and non-believers. We are shaped by every language and culture, drawn from every end of this Earth; and because we have tasted the bitter swill of civil war and segregation, and emerged from that dark chapter stronger and more united, we cannot help but believe that the old hatreds shall someday pass; that the lines of tribe shall soon dissolve; that as the world grows smaller, our common humanity shall reveal itself; and that America must play its role in ushering in a new era of peace.

Good.

To the Muslim world, we seek a new way forward, based on mutual interest and mutual respect. To those leaders around the globe who seek to sow conflict, or blame their society's ills on the West - know that your people will judge you on what you can build, not what you destroy. To those who cling to power through corruption and deceit and the silencing of dissent, know that you are on the wrong side of history; but that we will extend a hand if you are willing to unclench your fist.

Double wow. Translation: We will encourage freedom in the Islamic world. That is one of the cornerstones of neoconservatism. The Bush Doctrine is not going away, folks. It's just going to get a new label and a fresh coat of paint, and a better PR guy.

To the people of poor nations, we pledge to work alongside you to make your farms flourish and let clean waters flow; to nourish starved bodies and feed hungry minds. And to those nations like ours that enjoy relative plenty, we say we can no longer afford indifference to suffering outside our borders; nor can we consume the world's resources without regard to effect. For the world has changed, and we must change with it.

I like this, though we do already have the Peace Corps and Americorps. What else does he have in mind? More foreign aid? Swell. How does he plan to ensure that host nations use the aid to help, not harm their people?

As we consider the road that unfolds before us, we remember with humble gratitude those brave Americans who, at this very hour, patrol far-off deserts and distant mountains. They have something to tell us today, just as the fallen heroes who lie in Arlington whisper through the ages. We honor them not only because they are guardians of our liberty, but because they embody the spirit of service; a willingness to find meaning in something greater than themselves.

Again, nothing wrong with honoring our fallen heroes. But note, again, the emphasis on sacrifice.

And yet, at this moment - a moment that will define a generation - it is precisely this spirit that must inhabit us all.

"This moment...that will define a generation." He's talking about his own inauguration here--just his mere presence on the podium. Yes, he's the first black man to be President. Yes, that's historic. But getting there is, comparatively speaking, the easy part. Now he has to prove himself through presidential actions. If he doesn't, then this little snippet comes off as Clintonesque and self-involved.

For as much as government can do and must do, it is ultimately the faith and determination of the American people upon which this nation relies.

True. And yet, his ideas of what government "must do" will no doubt differ from mine.

It is the kindness to take in a stranger when the levees break, the selflessness of workers who would rather cut their hours than see a friend lose their job which sees us through our darkest hours. It is the firefighter's courage to storm a stairway filled with smoke, but also a parent's willingness to nurture a child, that finally decides our fate.

Again, a salute to individual achievement, laced with a theme of sacrifice.

Our challenges may be new. The instruments with which we meet them may be new. But those values upon which our success depends - hard work and honesty, courage and fair play, tolerance and curiosity, loyalty and patriotism - these things are old. These things are true. They have been the quiet force of progress throughout our history. What is demanded then is a return to these truths. What is required of us now is a new era of responsibility - a recognition, on the part of every American, that we have duties to ourselves, our nation, and the world, duties that we do not grudgingly accept but rather seize gladly, firm in the knowledge that there is nothing so satisfying to the spirit, so defining of our character, than giving our all to a difficult task.
This is the price and the promise of citizenship.
This is the source of our confidence - the knowledge that God calls on us to shape an uncertain destiny.

All true, all good. No arguments.

This is the meaning of our liberty and our creed - why men and women and children of every race and every faith can join in celebration across this magnificent mall, and why a man whose father less than sixty years ago might not have been served at a local restaurant can now stand before you to take a most sacred oath. So let us mark this day with remembrance, of who we are and how far we have traveled.

Note the Clintonesque return to the emphasis on The Man, The Moment. "You are witnessing history, people, and I AM history. Stand in awe of Me and My Moment."

In the year of America's birth, in the coldest of months, a small band of patriots huddled by dying campfires on the shores of an icy river. The capital was abandoned. The enemy was advancing. The snow was stained with blood. At a moment when the outcome of our revolution was most in doubt, the father of our nation ordered these words be read to the people:
"Let it be told to the future world...that in the depth of winter, when nothing but hope and virtue could survive...that the city and the country, alarmed at one common danger, came forth to meet [it]."

The father of our nation has a name, you know: George Washington. No harm in mentioning it, since you're quoting him. Plus, there might be some kids graduating our schools today who don't know who you're talking about.

America. In the face of our common dangers, in this winter of our hardship, let us remember these timeless words. With hope and virtue, let us brave once more the icy currents, and endure what storms may come. Let it be said by our children's children that when we were tested we refused to let this journey end, that we did not turn back nor did we falter; and with eyes fixed on the horizon and God's grace upon us, we carried forth that great gift of freedom and delivered it safely to future generations.

Mixed metaphors all over the place, but not a bad ending. Nothing that warrants being etched in granite, but I'll give him a B or B+. And now the new presidency begins...